I am still amazed and delighted with the immediate success of Controlling Sarah (not work safe), already #2 for the month of December 2010 (not work safe) at the BDSM Library. Over 10,000 readers in five days! For those not familiar with that site, some very good writers post free stories there. The stories are always free and we writers get no payment, we just share our work.
On the not-free side of the world, I am planning on reworking the same story as something a little more mainstream. More like an action/adventure romance based on the same story listed above. If you are shy about graphic descriptions of sex and brutality then the book will be the better choice. If you want your hot sex and paddling laid out in words, then the free one is for you.
The places that publish my commercial work do not allow graphic depictions of sex, so that is a limitation too. I might try a commercial version of Controlling Sarah, at least 40,000 words, if one of the adult content sites wants to distribute.
Right now, I have part 11 (3,000 words) off to my new volunteer editor and it will be submitted to BDSM Library as an update to the original. Sarah and Suki decided to sit out the rest of this project, so it is just me and Aubrey for this go.
Fiona almost has the new cover ready for Controlling Sarah, my latest collaboration with Suki and Sarah. Will post it here first when complete. The parts 1 - 10 went live at BDSMlibrary.com on 6 Dec. 2010 and has a few hundred reads with one review now. That sight is not safe for work, so I suggest you click with caution Controlling Sarah. Suki II: Sunshine Returns is a free read there too, but same cautions apply.
In the libertarian world of 2030s Virginia in general and Crystal City in specific, private parks are the norm. They are open to the public 24/7, clean and safe. Public parks are where one goes to have trouble find them. Below are some of the privately owned parks as they look in the 2010s.
12th Street Park:
In the 2030s, this is the only private park in Crystal City that is not considered safe. The developer on the south side tries to keep it guarded, but the developer on the north side continues to make it accessible, rather than providing recreation space on the north end.
Outdoor sales of what was considered contraband and vice in earlier decades is rampant, but just a lure for thieves.
My first thought was "wow, heavy wood furniture!" In a moment I was thinking it could be adapted as a play apparatus in Suki's apartment, for those play sessions with an early American theme.
I suppose this ties into both Suki series, since I never mention a payphone in either. In the draft for the second Suki With A Twist story I mention landline phones in a hotels. I recall people my age complaining about disappearing payphones a few years ago, but have not heard much about it lately. For the geomapped versions of these pictures in higher resolution, click the link below each one.
All of the locations are in the Crystal City Underground. The maps show the approximate position of the camera's corresponding "above ground" location.
There is one more location I need to shoot, by the old food court. The last two images above are from the north end. There are two remaining payphones closer to the METRO, behind the security desk at the public restrooms across from Dunkin' Donuts.
I spent a bit of the weekend taking pictures of AnimeUSA.Org con attendees and posted them on the SukiProject blog. Keyword AnimeUSA. The care taken in making these costumes is amazing.
Books on display, in order listed above, at Park Sundries
Park Sundries is center left in this frame, behind the black car.
Entrance to 2231 Crystal Drive (Crystal Park III). Park Sundries is in the left in frame.
This is as near to "ground zero" as one can get in the novels, making it a very special location to me. Suki and her mother's offices are one block south, on the 2300 block of Crystal Drive.
In Suki With A Twist: Part One, the spa Suki attends is nearby, she and her friends dine at the Steak House on the 11th floor of this entrance. Her apartment is several blocks to the north, on the same side of the street. In Suki I, she walks past this location from her mother's office on the way to the METRO station and she walks past it several other times, including a few times with John the morning after their first date.
Much of Suki III: Never Let Us End, occurs near here too.
Many thanks to all who frequent Park Sundries and those who purchase my books there.
In the 2030s environment set for both Suki book series, there is mention of "the hyperinflation" from earlier years. Inflation is under control, but prices may seem higher to the reader compared with today. I didn't want to change the form of currency, I stuck with the history that I am used to where prices go up and so do salaries (actual inflation) with a nod or two at price appreciation. Manufactured goods continue to be cheaper and cheaper in adjusted dollars, etc. In Suki I, Patricia tries to tip a pizza deliveryman $100 and she uses the same amount to bribe a cab driver into letting Suki smoke in the car. Table dances at exotic dance clubs are $1000, but all of the items for a new gourmet kitchen are less expensive than a high-end refrigerator today.
No, Fed Chairman Ben Bernanke is not an ally of mine trying to make my books come true. His latest move of printing $600 Billion, to buy bonds and flood the economy with money, is a made-to-order act to guarantee high inflation for the next several years.
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In the news today is a story (at the link above) about a worm/malware attack affecting various industries in several countries, including Iran. Not many details yet and the idea is a familiar one: Shut down an infrastructure by disabling the automated systems that control it.
What I did in the book was guess a little bit at the future, using my almost five decades of life experience with evolving technology, as to what the Iranians might have in the 2030s. Since I do not have a clue now, nor at the time of the outlining and writing, what the Iranians have, I took a stab at what might be around in general twenty years from now and had the Iranians ripping-off systems that are slightly dated.
I started with a view of US forces in the Continental US (CONUS) and gave my male lead some credit for the systems being used by US/Israeli Allied forces. Autonomous aircraft and trucks were a big thing, makes for a good visual for the mind. There needed to be a supply scheduling system tying all that together, so I made one up and to illustrate it, I had a US Marine with a small staff monitoring the Eglin Air Force Base deployment operations.
One thing I was trying to avoid was having the couple involved in brutal, horrible, violent encounters like were in the books that preceded Suki IV. The "drama" for this book was their work with the government and John's son being in the war zone. By this time, John's son and Suki's best friend are a couple too. That was enough emotional tension for me.
John's muscle-car building and aviation program management skills come in handy, since he is one of the "geeks" assigned to defeat Iranian cargo aircraft and he gets to help out with the rolling stock. However, one thing I did differently than what has been described in the current story about Iran, the Allies are actively targeting specific functions within Iranian machines.
Not to be left out, I gave Suki a breakthrough. She discovers the "Allah Hack" to bypass the biometric locks on all of the Iranian equipment.
Interesting picture forwarded by one of my military fact-checkers. A stripped bicycle, vicinity 12th & N, NW:
I was passing I & 7th and met this nice young lady distributing Street Sense "Where the poor and homeless earn and give their two cents." It began in 2003 and it is certainly and contains some interesting stories. If you see these folks, give a donation and take a look at their paper.
Zoom in on the green sign on the corner. This is where all that Stimulus Money went!
All this only generally relates to the 2030s environment of the Suki series. Some feedback I have gotten about how I depict DC is that nobody there has any manners in the 2030s. I am here to tell you, they are generally short on manners now and I don't see it changing for the better in the future. In Suki I some of the overly regulated nature is mentioned. It may be mentioned in the first three books in that series. I may have give the impression that DC and MD are impoverished, which was not my thought at all. What I was trying to bring out is if people live in a nanny state it does not matter what their income, they have a a tendency to behave badly when not under the watch of the authorities and sometimes right in front of the police.
In Suki With A Twist: Part One, I describe a concept for parking garage traffic control. A quite simple system, actually. John is returning one of Suki's cars, a vintage Jaguar, as soon as he enters the underground parking garage he is guided by arrows that illuminate in the floor and on the posts of the garage. Suki's car has a reserved parking space and the system reads the radio-frequency tag (RF Tag) in the license plate of the car. The tag still has a visible number and does not appear any different than a 2010 Virginia license plate.
John uses a different system for his vehicles. The paints he uses on his vintage muscle cars are infused with nano-tags that report corrosion, ruptures in the paint system, leaks, etc.
Today I got a little video of a 2010 parking ticket and the current technology behind that. The video is pretty bad (my fault for being a bad camera operator), but you may be able to see the handheld device the Arlington County Parking Officer uses to record information and issue the ticket to a silver Mercedes convertible, VA tag XJL-2173:
Part One
The driver arrives and is none too happy, for something he must have known was wrong when he parked there.
There are several competing views on the government charging for parking on the street. In my opinion, that street was already paid for and people in the area pay for its maintenance through various other taxes. This is especially true in Arlington County, VA, where the streets are paid for through fuel taxes and an annual vehicle tax. One problem that arises with free street parking is employees of the local businesses take those spots before patrons can get park there ans spend money. A counter to that is, the neighborhood has plenty of underground parking, at reasonable rates during the week, free on weekends and evenings. For my books, I think I will stick with plenty of "free" parking in the area.
In Suki I, John parks one of his muscle cars across the street from Suki's apartment over night.
A new event in the 2000s and '10s, Vintage Crystal continues into the 2030s of Suki and John's world.
The Crystal City Business Improvement District (BID) is turning up the heat with the return of the flavor-filled fourth annual Vintage Crystal. The spice is back with more wines, food, music and dancing. Building on last year’s Latin-themed success, Crystal City will once again be serving up tasty tapas, tempting tequila, and a ton of fun.
This is what I call a Libertarian neighborhood party. Everything is on private property and the local businesses provide all of the entertainment. If I mention this in any of the Suki series books, the security will be privately contracted and professional in the 2030s, rather than the arrangement Arlington County is involved in as pictured.
Activist groups protest in Arlington, Virginia, frequently, against the “new plantation system”. In Virginia, the police cannot use “voyeur cam” evidence, nor government security cam evidence, as the only evidence against people for traffic violations. An officer must be present to issue a ticket. This results in a “misunderstanding” with drivers from DC and Maryland having the impression that they can do anything if a police officer is not present.
Northern Virginia and Manhattan have the highest concentration of voyeur cams in the USA and their images can be used in civil suits. When DC and MD drivers injure people or, in most cases, damage very expensive vehicles of their victims, they are held liable in VA courts. They frequently do not have enough insurance coverage to cover the damage and lose their homes. Then the protestors come in and disrupt traffic for hours or days because of the “plantation boss” who just “won” a house in DC, to pay for their ongoing medical treatment, of course.
Above is part of the 2030s setting for both Suki series novels. The budding Arlington County 'libertopia' is surrounded by jurisdictions full of people who are used to government handouts and not used to individual responsibility. When working through how the concept was going to be presented in the books I only mentioned a demonstration in front of Suki's apartment and the couple spends time in John's neighborhood of Rosslyn instead.
Below, some pictures from my friend, Kourtney "Coach" Young and his video record of Crystal City Under Siege, 12 March 2009:
In this case, from 2009, the ANSWER crowd has some beef with KBR. Video is available on YouTube, mostly uploaded 22 March 2009, if you are interested in more of what these demonstrators had to say.
See Suki's neighborhood on the map of Suki's World:
